Caitlin
Kilgore November
11, 12
708 ELA
This I Believe Essay
One time in Montauk I was biking with my
family when I saw a snake. I am terrified of snakes so naturally I freaked out.
From that moment on I was sure that my bike some how attracted snakes. When my
family and I went on 35 and 36-mile bike rides in Cumberland, Maryland. I
didn’t enjoy the view and spending time with my family because I was looking at
the ground, for snakes. My whole family was laughing and enjoying themselves.
My dad was taking video of us with the camera strapped around his neck. My mom was relaxed and my brother was getting
rid of his endless pit of energy. And I was looking at the ground. The couple times we stopped for lunch and
breaks, the view was amazing. You could
see mountains in the distance. The sky was bright blue with only a few
scattered clouds. Trees and creeks surrounded us. Every once in a while we
would pass a lake and would see ducks and other water animals. We heard birds and squirrels running through
the forest. A couple of times we passed
these big, beautiful bridges. We passed and went through many tunnels.
Sometimes we went through tunnels that were through mountains that were too
tall to go over. I saw all of this in breaks and stops and from what my family
told me afterwards. I wish that I could go back on the trail again and really
enjoy the view. Rather than spending my
trip with the ground.
This is why I believe in enjoying life to
the fullest. Even if it means taking risks.
In life people talk about being safe. They
worry about there children getting hurt and how no, kids can’t do this they
aren’t ready. But if people took more risks would they be ready? In life taking
risks is good to some extent because it prepares you for life and the real
world.
I
should have taken more risks that day. My whole family was there and they
weren’t going to let anything happen to me. If I had seen a snake which I did I
know that if god forbid that snake I had seen had slithered down the vine and
had come over a bitten me my parents would have done everything they could to
get me to a hospital and get me the treatment I needed. This is why I believe
in taking risks.
I like your essay! It was great how you backed up your belief with a funny anecdote
ReplyDeletei like how your personal story really relates to your belief
ReplyDeletegreat essay I like your belief and i agree with your belief
ReplyDeleteI'm scared of snakes too your intro. had a very good hook.
ReplyDeleteThanks guys! I more than scared I am terrified of snakes i don't like how the move.
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